Jennifer Martinez
Eng 101

I really hope I'm doing this right.

1.) In the story destroyed wrote by Martin it talks about athletes as ''sinners'' who have ruined their sports do to the addiction of drugs and how dangerous drugs are. It also talks about Professional sports and steroid use. Written by Peter Martin

2.) In paragraph number 10 it talks about professional complication with steroids and athletes. It talks about enhancers being a good way to treat sports but also a way of destroying the players by saying they cheat using steroids
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3.) My favorite quoit in this story from paragraph 11 second to last sentence where it says 'there are humans like the rest of us.' "Or at least they were before they started juicing." ( Written by Peter Martin. On page number 508.) It is my favorite part because I understand how people might struggle with addiction.. How a person might feel completely normal has a human one day. Say a person is then prescribe prescriptions and they end up getting addicted. This might make the person feel nothing like a human. 

I comment on:  
1.) http://charlottels.blogspot.com/2015/09/blog-post-1.html?showComment=1443043420143#c4096234091827809147

2.) http://apisorchik.blogspot.com/2015/09/destroyed-article-destroyed-by-peter-f.html?showComment=1443044716816#c6926456658887363957



9/26/15 I went back and did some changes that my peers said and you. Thank you. 

My name is Jennifer Martinez. My major is Addiction Studies. I was born in New York and moved to Washington state at a young age. I moved from Grays Harbor area to Forks. Twilight! I would have to say that one of my strengths in writing would have to be that once I get started writing it's hard for me to stop. I just get so into my work. An area I could really use help in is.... my English language. I've heard friends sayt that what I text then sometimes they have a hard time understanding what it is I'm trying to say.