Blog post #5 Outline

For my topic, I'm going to write about chemical decency addiction and the disease of addiction. How it can be a struggle for some than to others.


1.) Two most additives
  A. Alcohol addiction
  B. Chemical addiction

2.)  Physical addiction
  A. Behavioral syndrome
  B. Compulsive seeking

3.) Psychological symptoms
 A. Loss of memory
 B. Personally change

4.) Physical effects
 A. Heart attack, stroke
 B. Aggressive or volition behavior

Blog # 4

The topic I choose for my contract and compare essay is cats vs dogs. I will be explaining differences between cats and dogs and the comparisons for both. I chose this topic because the cats and dogs have many intelligence that people aren't aware of and I would like to share that and I also have a compassion for both of the animals.

Blog Post #3

Blog Post #3

In the article "I want a wife" by Jodi Brandy it's talking about a wife that the author is looking for. Not just an ordinary wife, but a wife that is A plus. A wife that cooks, cleans cares about her appearance the way that she looks and presents herself. A wife that respects her husband and has good social skills. Pretty much the author is talking about a wife that has a jack of all trades, the perfect wife I would like to say.

In the article  "Men- It's In Their Nature" by Christina Sommers it talks about gender form and free boys from stereotypes. Or has I would like to think of that men acting like men and the facts in science.

I am going to be writing excuse me analyzing the article called "I want a wife" by Jodi Bryan. I find that article funny because it to me in a way of stereotyping the ideas woman, wife / mother and some people don't understand that 3 jobs has just in the household is a lot then you have your own life to attend to.

I commented on;

1.) http://cathys101.blogspot.com/

2.) http://marissapcrs.blogspot.com/

Descriptive Free-Write Eng 101

                                                              Descriptive Free-Write

Everybody shows up on Friday at 3 p.m. . We all set up our beds put her belongings out and make it has if it was our own room. This is a special place for me that only comes around once a year for the weekend. One time I was setting up my bed there was a person next to me who was not in the best of moods so I talked to her for a little bit. I can tell that she wasn't feeling good by the body language you was doing and how she was talking and presenting herself. We got to talking for about an hour or so afterwards she felt a whole lot better she was going through some hard stuff. We went for a walk as we were walking we can smell dinner floating in the air and it smells delicious. It smells like something that came from a five star restaurant that you just could not leave any leftovers. When I sat together along with other people at the dinner table we had our dinner and it was delicious. Afterwards there was a really nice dessert that we all got together it was apple pie and vanilla bean ice cream. The taste was superb. I love the waves ice cream melts melts on your tongue when you're eating it. After that we all got together in the huge living room that they have and we talked for an hour and a half sharing are events that has happened in our life. Sometimes the message that they're getting across makes one of us women cry. It is very touching to hear what another person is going through and I life and how far that they have the message that they are getting across makes one of us women cry. It is very touching to hear what another person is going through and I life and how far that they have came. When that is all over we end up going to bed. Usually it takes me a little bit of time to go to sleep even after I taking melatonin. I can remember the last time I was having to go to sleep and I couldn't I tossed and turned all night I repositioned my pillow on my left arm I repositioned my pillow on my right arm I laid on my back I laid on my stomach but nothing still seem to work. Finally my body just gave up and I was tired and I was able to go to sleep. It's about 8 o'clock in the morning now the next day and breakfast is ready for all of us to eat. We usually will end up taking a shower getting ready and walk up to where our breakfast is. We usually end up getting a cup of coffee with some coffee creamer in it and just a teaspoon of sugar. I mix that together and it taste nice and sweet. After breakfast the family we will usually play cards or board games or just you activities throughout the whole day until it's time for dinner again. One of my favorite things to also do there is I like going in the canoe boat. When I'm on the canoe boat in the lake I feel free. I feel free from the world free from anything that's on my mind just like a free spirit would feel. I gently put one pedal in the water on my right side then I take it out put it over my head and put the paddle into the left side and just keep stroking left and right and eventually my speed starts to pick up and I can just feel like as if I'm floating across the water. When I'm out here with my family for the weekend my mind is free from the world. I really enjoy my time.



I comment on the following people:

1.) http://apisorchik.blogspot.com/2015/10/my-favorite-place-sun-shines-clouds.html

2.) http://laurencebuzzell.blogspot.com/2015/10/descriptive-free-write-i-like-to-go-to.html#comment-form

Jennifer Martinez
Eng 101

I really hope I'm doing this right.

1.) In the story destroyed wrote by Martin it talks about athletes as ''sinners'' who have ruined their sports do to the addiction of drugs and how dangerous drugs are. It also talks about Professional sports and steroid use. Written by Peter Martin

2.) In paragraph number 10 it talks about professional complication with steroids and athletes. It talks about enhancers being a good way to treat sports but also a way of destroying the players by saying they cheat using steroids
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3.) My favorite quoit in this story from paragraph 11 second to last sentence where it says 'there are humans like the rest of us.' "Or at least they were before they started juicing." ( Written by Peter Martin. On page number 508.) It is my favorite part because I understand how people might struggle with addiction.. How a person might feel completely normal has a human one day. Say a person is then prescribe prescriptions and they end up getting addicted. This might make the person feel nothing like a human. 

I comment on:  
1.) http://charlottels.blogspot.com/2015/09/blog-post-1.html?showComment=1443043420143#c4096234091827809147

2.) http://apisorchik.blogspot.com/2015/09/destroyed-article-destroyed-by-peter-f.html?showComment=1443044716816#c6926456658887363957



9/26/15 I went back and did some changes that my peers said and you. Thank you. 

My name is Jennifer Martinez. My major is Addiction Studies. I was born in New York and moved to Washington state at a young age. I moved from Grays Harbor area to Forks. Twilight! I would have to say that one of my strengths in writing would have to be that once I get started writing it's hard for me to stop. I just get so into my work. An area I could really use help in is.... my English language. I've heard friends sayt that what I text then sometimes they have a hard time understanding what it is I'm trying to say.